2007年11月20日火曜日

My Response

The letter “Tired of getting stopped,” was written by Allan Mcintyre who is a black and lives in Nagoya, Japan. He says that he is really sick of getting stopped by police to show them his “gaijin card.”

The writer uses the authority to convince the audience. He is a foreigner who lives in Japan now, and has been stopped by police many times in Japan. He says “I've been stopped in front of Takashimaya about 13 times and have lived in Japan for only six months.” He talks about the issue through his experience.

The Takashimaya is a very big department store which is in the Nagoya station. In front of Takashimaya is “The best place to meet in Nagoya” as he says. The audience must find it embarrassing to be stopped by police in front of many people. At the same time, the audience would feel sorry for what he has been through.

The letter is convincible, because the writer uses the authority to persuade his audience. The writer is a foreigner who lives in Japan and has been stopped by police many times in front of many people. His audience must feel sorry for his embarrassing experience.

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